Third time’s a charm, right?
There wasn’t an issue with the stitch pattern this time. I still love the stitch pattern.
Rather, I decided to change the rate of increases from every row to every other row.  This will make for a longer, skinnier shawl, and I’d rather have the shawl longer and skinnier, than shorter. I think longer shawls are easier to wear, and I was a tiny bit afraid (even with a second skein) of running out of yarn before getting it long enough.
The cats, above (Cali scratching his ear, Meggie looking off disdainfully), are not tremendously impressed with my progress!